Tempore Exitus - First draft

This is the first fully pieced together draft of our short film. Now the next stage is to present it to our target audience and have them voice their opinion.
Right now there are quite a few improvements and tweaks to be made to the film before we re-draft it.

-There are some imbalances in the sound levels.
-There are some differences in lighting levels in some scenes.
-The narrative needs some clarity, we need to add some additional footage to make more sense.
-We need more sound effects to work with the special effects.
-There are still a few shots where you can see the actors smiling, these need refining.
-Some audio clips have the wind in the background, these need balancing.
-Some jump cuts we've used tend to be sketchy and need refining.
-We need to establish our characters better.
-There is an issue with a change in hair colour for our main actress.
-The "time travel" high pitched sound is too loud and needs lowering.